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Hideaki Kumo Chunin
Posts : 84 Join date : 2015-08-07
| Subject: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Thu Sep 17, 2015 8:42 pm | |
| Name: Ace Shot Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Close (2-3 meters) Handseals: N/A Speed: As Fast as User Description: In the midst of close combat, the user quickens his blood in his designated arm, and launches a speedy punch that is equal to the speed stats of the user. (Depending on Strength Stats, the Possible Harm) - Visual Detail:
Name: Sixth Sense Rank: A Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Supplementary Handseals: Rabbit - Horse Speed: [+15 Stat Boost of Strength & Speed] Description: The sixth sense of the Prodigy, is a technique in which the user focuses & speeds the motion of his blood cells in which he's able to increase their own physical capabilities. - Visual Detail:
Name: Autumns Falling Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Close Range Handseals: N/A Speed: As Fast As User Description: Autumns Falling, a technique created by Dominick Hideaki in efforts to create a perfect fighting style utilizes the fury of footwork. With a spinning motion he's able to send a variety of kicks into the opponent sending them flying a few meters, in any direction. # of Kicks: 7 - Visual Detail:
Name: Pulse Rank:C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Close Range Handseals: N/A Speed: As Fast As User Description: Pulse, utilizes the power of it's user. Thrusting an elbow & Fist into the opponent after flanking behind them. - Visual Detail:
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Takeshi Uchiha Kiri Genin
Posts : 185 Join date : 2015-08-26 Age : 38
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Thu Sep 17, 2015 9:16 pm | |
| All seem well made and aren't overpowered. Approved. I like!
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Takeshi Uchiha Kiri Genin
Posts : 185 Join date : 2015-08-26 Age : 38
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Fri Sep 18, 2015 11:26 am | |
| Upon further inspection, the following technique is Denied. You may recreate with a different affect if you wish, but as it is, it undermines the Hyuuga Clan's Gentle Fist, so it will not be approved. - Quote :
- Name: Pulse
Rank:C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Close Range Handseals: N/A Speed: As Fast As User Description: Pulse, utilizes the power of it's user. Thrusting an elbow & Fist into the opponent, they temporary block the chakra networks of their opponent until the next the post. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Fri Sep 18, 2015 11:17 pm | |
| Ace shot also denied as there's a hyuuga tech that does this.
Add a Handseal or two for sixth sense
Be more specific with autumn's falling. I don't understand if it's a melee or a projectile. Also what does it have to do with midair combat. If it uses lightning Chakra it has a lightning element. Details | |
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Hideaki Kumo Chunin
Posts : 84 Join date : 2015-08-07
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Sun Sep 20, 2015 4:52 pm | |
| @Ryan If you'd look at the the spoiler, you'd see the visual representation as it shows melee combat.
Edited Please Approve..... | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Sun Sep 20, 2015 5:06 pm | |
| I saw the visual. I still want your wordings to be more descriptive. A single ssentence will generally not be enough. Review Autumn's falling once again. All others are good | |
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Hideaki Kumo Chunin
Posts : 84 Join date : 2015-08-07
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Sun Sep 20, 2015 6:09 pm | |
| Fixed, I have a tried my best a little. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Sun Sep 20, 2015 10:31 pm | |
| How many kicks are in this variety.
Sorry if I'm seeming tough lol. I appreciate your hard work. I just prefer jutsu be specific | |
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Hideaki Kumo Chunin
Posts : 84 Join date : 2015-08-07
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:16 am | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:18 pm | |
| Approved | |
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