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Elixar Takoyaiba
Kumo Jounin
Posts : 83
Join date : 2015-08-03
Age : 27
 | Subject: Elixar's Arsenal  Mon Aug 10, 2015 8:57 am | |
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[b]Name[/b]:
[b]Rank[/b]:
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[b]Element[/b]:
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[b]Handseals[/b]:
[b]Speed[/b]: (Only if possible; Refer to Speed stats)
[b]Description[/b]:
Uryū no ame - Water Dragon's Rain - Axle of Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Shajiku no Ame (Axle of Rain)
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: 8 Meters
Handseals: N/A
Speed: +5 Speed on user
Description: Shajiku no Ame (Axle of Rain) is the first offensive form of Uryū no ame. The user uses this technique by coating his katana with Water chakra while charging forward to attack with a thrust to impale a target. The user would normally twist whilst thrusting, giving enough piercing power to burrow into or through a small tree of approximately 20cm. Using water chakra to spurt bursts of water to spin the user they can attack with a rotation per second similar to that of the Izanuka's Piercing fang.
Drawbacks: Easily parried or dodged due to straight forward movement. Can only be used with one blade.
- Rolling Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Sakamaku Ame (Rolling Rain)
Rank: C - B (C to train)
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: 2 Meters
Handseals: N/A
Speed: The speed of the user's swing
Description: Sakamaku Ame (Rolling Rain) is the defensive second form of the Uryū no ame style. The user creates multiple waves of water around him and crouches whilst holding his sword vertically before himself as a method of defence. This technique is used with Water chakra to collect water and use it. This works by the chakra running down the blade and drawing the water into a solid wall of around 2 meters in height to protect their front.. (C rank Chakra usage) If there is no water about, then the user must use their chakra to create water during their swing. (B rank Chakra usage) (Just enough to utilise)
Drawbacks: The user Is unable to see the opponent, and visa versa. Lasts one of each person's posts. Can only be used with one blade.
- Last Minute Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Yarazu no Ame (Last Minute Rain)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: 15 Meters
Handseals: N/A
Speed: 30
Description: Yarazu no Ame (Last Minute Rain) is the offensive third form of the Uryū no ame style. In which The user drops his Sword, kicking the base of the hilt with his foot to send it propelling towards the intended target. As soon as the kick connects, a large spray of water chakra propels the sword at a speed equal to something moving with a speed stat of 30.
Drawbacks: Flies directly straight. Can only be used with one blade.
- May Wind, October Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Gofuu Juuu (May Wind, October Rain)
Rank: A
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: 3 Meters
Handseals: Ram, Bird, Monkey, Horse
Speed: N/A
Description: Gofuu Juuu (May Wind, October Rain) is the fourth technique in Uryū no ame and it's defensive. The user manipulates multiple short blades to disappear from sight. To obscure the blades from sight they must be at least equal to or shorter than the size of a Wazisashi. It is coated with water chakra and with the high speeds it becomes something between translucent, and transparent. Closer to Transparent. The user is stationary in the way that Last minute rain works. The blades appear transparent as the water chakra forms a layer of water that reflects light in a manner that causes the blades to disappear partially from view (Think active camouflage from Halo), they're blurry. And the range of the blades is 3 meters, they are thrown within 3 meters every time, without fail (unless interfered with of course.)
Drawbacks: Sensors will have no problem tracing the blades, as will Kenjutsu users. Short range. Can only be used with 3 or 4 short blades. Requires the ability to use Last minute rain to use.
- Early Summer Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Samidare (Early Summer Rain)
Rank: S
Type: Kenjutsu (Bukijutsu)
Element: N/A
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: N/A
Speed: +20 Whilst move is active (+40 if used in conjunction with Iaido)
Description: Uryū no ame: Samidare (Early Summer Rain) is the offensive fifth stance of the Uryū no ame style and considered Elixar's signature move in which The user would slash using his right hand, but this would simply be revealed as a feint attack whilst the actual katana is falling to the user's other hand to create a genuine slash after the intended target is caught off guard attempting to dodge the first feint attack. This can have its power increased by flowing chakra through it. The speed in which the user swings and then replaces is of such a high speed and precision that the feint's chance of success is usually high when being used against someone of a Bukijutsu 3 or below. The feint reaction often is the opponent leaning or stepping back in order to evade the first 'attack', going off balance due to the sheer speed of the attack. The user however steps forwards into the true attack to close any distance that the opponent may have created. If this move is combo'd with Iaido, the force of this technique is pushed up speed levels for an additional C rank cost.
Drawbacks: Requires the user to be Ambidextrous and have a Bukijutsu (Specific to Kenjutsu) 5 at least. Can only be used with one blade. Against an opponent who has seen the move before the speed boost decreases to compensate for familiarity. -5 from speed boost against an opponent who has seen the move before. -10 against someone who has lived the technique before, -15 against someone who is capable of using the technique. Learned through Elixar.
- Splashing Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Shibuki Ame (Splashing Rain)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Ranton
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: N/A
Speed: N/A
Description: Shibuki Ame (Splashing Rain) is the defensive 6th form of the Uryū no ame style. The user holds their blade backwards and spins it to create a whirlwind-like shield around them. When using this stance, the user is orbited by a set of electrified balls of water chakra that orbit the user's centre of gravity which gives an increased guard against physical attacks due to the unique and sturdy guard and the orbiting defence. +10 Durability whilst active
Drawbacks: Unable to use standard Kenjutsu techniques whilst this form is active.
- Pelting Rain:
Name: Uryū no ame: Shinotsuku Ame (Pelting Rain)
Rank: A
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Ranton
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: N/A
Speed: N/A
Description: Shinotsuku Ame (Pelting Rain) is the offensive 7th form of the Uryū no ame style. The user uses the blade of the sword to cut around the bearer whilst tracing a large black cloud at the same time. It creates large Blasts of electrified, high pressured water chakra to fall on the opponents who are struck by the sword. The blasts of water are equal in pressure and volume to the Water Fang Bullet and the user can spin up to 3 full rotations for the same affect to be fired off. Each firing off of the technique drains C rank chakra per connected blade hit. So using against multiple enemies is effective, but very chakra inefficient.
Basically the user spins up to 3 full circles, tracing a cloud as they do so. If the user's blade comes into contact with something, the cloud blasts an electrified bolt of water down on the thing it connected with.
- Sparrow's Beak:
Name: Uryū no ame: Beccata di Rondine (Sparrow's Beak)
Rank: S
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: Sword Length + 2 Meters
Handseals:
Speed: +25 During Usage. -15 in Speed and Handseal Speed during cooldown "slowness"
Description: Beccata di Rondine (Sparrow's Beak) is the offensive 8th form of the Uryū no ame style. In which the user rapidly thrusts their blade numerous times towards a target, much like a flock of attacking swallows, hence the technique's name. The stabbing makes a total of 48 times. The Water chakra is released at the same time to give off a blue 'swallow' at the end of each strike. These 'swallows' will travel two meters before dissipating. The unique thing about the jutsu is it never strikes the same place twice to cause wide damage and to injure as many points as possible. Final attack creates a bird slightly larger than the other birds. Peck diameter is surprisingly low, sitting at 3cm on all of the beaks except the last one which sits at 5cm
Drawbacks: Lactic acid builds up in the arm that uses this technique, resulting in the arm being slow for 3 turns. This requires the user to not be using the blade for these turns in order for the acid to dissipate. If not, the acid stays and results in the slowness of the arm. Using a technique with the slower arm reduces the force of the technique (by approximately one rank's worth) and increases the lactic acid's turn duration by 2. Alternate hit requires the other move.
End of Uryū no ame - Saber Throw:
Name: Saber Throw: Thunder Clap
Rank: S
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: 10 meters (standard) 25 meters (improved)
Handseals: None. Ram to perform correction.
Speed: Blade moves at a speed equal to the user's Strength stat transferred into Speed
Description: The user holds their desired blade and brings the arm that is holding it backwards. When it is far back enough; it snaps forward while also flicking the wrist. The user throws the blade in a boomerang fashion, with it cutting its way through obstacles and returning to the hand of the caster, during it's flight it spins at a great speed, and mostly is just a blurry disk of chakra. Variations in the skill of users meant that some could hurl their blades great distances or make mid-air course corrections. Also, there was a destructive variation of the technique where the blade could be thrown straight towards the target. The chakra would then discharge in all directions, making a small explosion of chakra. It is extremely damaging to anything alive, if it hits vital parts of the body, such as heart or head.
Drawbacks: To do the straight throw, the user must keep their arm bent back for at least turn. Explosion radius is only 1/2 a meter but requires the user to be out of the blast range. Can cut allies if they are in the path of the Blade. +500 words to throw improved distance, strength has no impact on distance or speed. + 1000 words after improved distance (1500 total extra) to learn mid- air corrections, but can only be corrected 3 times in flight per throw and costs D rank chakra to correct. Explosion is B rank in force and cost. the mid air corrections act as the blade pausing for about a milisecond as it changes its direction and/or gradient. There is no swerve, it just changes.
Last edited by Elixar Takoyaiba on Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:08 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Conform to criticism) | |
|  | | Elixar Takoyaiba
Kumo Jounin
Posts : 83
Join date : 2015-08-03
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Elixar's Arsenal Mon Aug 10, 2015 9:01 am | |
| Name: Deadly Star
Rank: S
Type: Nin-Kenjutsu
Element: Ranton + Suiton
Range: 4 Meter Radius
Handseals: Ox -> Rat -> Dragon
Speed: +15 During Technique
Description: The user attacks at ferocious speed with any attack using a sword after making the three handseals. If the strike connects or is blocked, the Circus Platform jutsu activates and shoots upwards underneath the feet of the user and target, pushing both of them into the air. With the target unsuspecting the sudden rise, they would be tossed into a back spin and left vulnerable as the platform splits into a multitude of pads that make a sphere. The user also is pushed into a back spin, landing on one of the vertical platforms and pushing off with a burst of water chakra. The user then turns ad pushes off of another platform, striking the opponent again. The user systematically uses each of the 20 platforms to deliver 20 hits at a constant +15 speed, the 20th hit being from bottom to top before spinning into an 'Axle of Rain' style attack to drive the opponent into the ground.
Drawbacks: Requires the parent jutsus 'Storm Release: Circus Platform' and 'Axle of Rain'. Kenjutsu 5 and Ninjutsu 3. The formation does not work if the attack does not connect, but chakra is not expended. If the two fighters are already in the air, the user can use the handsigns to create the platform sphere. Each of the platforms dissipates after being used.
- Basic overview -
User rushes forwards
Swings sword
Sword connects or is blocked
Platform shoots up from beneath them, pushing them high into the air, knocking the unsuspecting opponent off balance
Dome of circus platform forms as the user makes a slash, jumping from platform to slash, to new platform until all platforms have been used once
Axle of Rain towards ground to finish
- End overview -
Last edited by Elixar Takoyaiba on Mon Aug 10, 2015 9:01 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Add speed stats) | |
| | | | Elixar Takoyaiba
Kumo Jounin
Posts : 83
Join date : 2015-08-03
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Elixar's Arsenal Mon Aug 10, 2015 9:15 am | |
| Raiyū no tenka Name: Raiyū no tenka: Senkai Kaminari (Whirling Thunder) Rank: B Type: Ken-Ninjutsu Element: Raiton Range: Sword Length Handseals: N/A Speed: +5 Speed during technique Description: Senkai Kaminari is the offensive eleventh form of Uryū no ame, and the 1st offensive form of Raiyū no tenka. The user turns one blade so it is the reverse grip. The other is held in the normal grip.This style utilises 2 blades and Lightning release. The user channels lightning release into both blades. The user then takes a leap forwards and spins, the repeated spinning deals multiple strikes to the same area, while the lightning release cuts through blades that aren't master forged or stronger, it numbs any living thing it cuts after 2 posts, for 2 posts. After 20 hits, the user sweeps low with both their feet and blades, either forcing them to jump or have their feet knocked out from underneath them. After sweeping low, the user kicks upwards, to kick them roughly 2 meters from the ground. The user then stabs one blade into the ground and jumps on top of it, immediately pushing off of it and jumping up to the opponent, the opponent at this time would be lying flat in mid-air with their body facing the sky while the user would be lying flat next to them with their body facing the floor. The user whirls round with the other blade electrified; scoring a clean cut on the opponent's midsection unless they do something to lessen the blow. Drawbacks: Requires Lighting Release and two swords. Kenjutsu 4 required | |
| | | | Elixar Takoyaiba
Kumo Jounin
Posts : 83
Join date : 2015-08-03
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Elixar's Arsenal Thu Aug 13, 2015 7:25 am | |
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| | | | Ryan
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| | Subject: Re: Elixar's Arsenal Thu Aug 13, 2015 8:42 pm | |
| I understand wanting to mix buki and water, but you need to label it as either a buki or ninjutsu stat so that we know which skill to look at. In this case, they seem to be majority buki skills. Pretty much anything buki related despite using an element will be bukijutsu
Also, I get that Bukijutsu normally doesnt use hand seals but you need some sort of start up because youre getting instant S ranks. I'll let you figure that one out. However, a few options I would offer are unique gestures or unique one hand signs you can create before use.
Now to actual grading (please god dont post an arsonal from now on. It was so intimidating to take this list on I almost skipped over it)
Axle of Rain: I feel like you mean they twist while thrusting, cause spinning while thrusting makes a big difference. Also a C rank powerful enough to pierce a tree is vague. Trees vary in thickness and durability. Assuming you mean an average oak tree, Rasengan can't even break through a fully grown tree in simple forms. And its a blunt designed to break through things. This is a pierce so I understand the difference, though I feel it is far too great in strength for a C rank.
Rolling Rain: How big are these waves? What direction is "all around him"
May Wind, October Rain: The bit about who can dodge it when is unnecessary as speed and reflexive ability will determine that. Also note it will require upkeep to keep the blades translucent.
Early Summer Rain: You mention getting faster with Iaido. No stacking at SWW. You take the highest value. Also you motion seems a bit unclear to me. You pretend like you're slashing with one hand and then slash with the other. Sounds like a good way to set up metagaming as the person would logically move outside of your range. And considering the range is only that of your sword, you mention moving in the technique which would change the range of the attack from that of which is filled in the field.
Splashing Rain: Makes no sense but I dont wanna outright deny it. You also need KKG to mix elements. So... Make it better somehow
Pelting Rain: Increasing the water to a burning temperature would require mixing in Katon, And mixing Katon and Suiton in one jutsu are exclusive to Terumi clan.
Duplicate Rain: This isnt a jutsu, this is a combo of jutsu used in one to save chakra. Break it up as jutsu have singular effects majority of the time,
Sparrow's Beak: You mention it being wide range of "pecks". Need you to specify how wide.
Thunder Clap: Pretty sure 'paying' for stronger effects isnt allowed. Also, you dont mention how powerful the cut is or how fast the blade travels or spins. | |
| | | | Elixar Takoyaiba
Kumo Jounin
Posts : 83
Join date : 2015-08-03
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Elixar's Arsenal Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:31 am | |
| Will make all bukijutsu
Axle - yeah, sorry that was poor wording, the tree would be the approx thickness of an average child. I.E relatively thin
Rolling - Front, up to two meters (basically enough to shroud them from view
May wind - will edit
ESR - Full back hand swing at close range, drops sword mid swing, misdirecting an opponent's vision/reaction. The dropped blade is then grabbed by the other hand and the user takes a full swing whilst taking another step forward. Also, the speed boost there wasn't intended to be a stack, it was intended to be a different speed increase instead.
Splashing - I posses this KKG
Pelting - Removing temperature
Duplicate - alrighty, removing
Sparrow - will do
Thunder Clap - my b, will just have retrain rather than buy
Will pm when edits are made, thanks for checking | |
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| | Subject: Re: Elixar's Arsenal Sat Aug 15, 2015 7:09 pm | |
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