techniques

Name: Wind Style: Wind Twister
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range: Close(5m)
Handseals: Bird
Description: After the user performs the bird handseal, a twister of wind will appear around them. This jutsu when used will create a twister of wind with a diameter of 5m, the twister created is as a result of many wind disks spinning at a very high speed(crescent shaped), this jutsu can be used to send the many blades out in all directions, proving as a very efficient offensive technique. The technique can travel 30m(since twister originates 5m away from the user, they can travel outwards for 25m, totalling 30m) a away from the user. If the user is to move, the twister would follow them. Despite it's offensive capabilities, it can be used as a defensive jutsu, and can only be seized in it's motion with a b ranked technique(exception is katon, which requires a c rank katon).


Name:Wind release: Wind prison
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range:Close
Handseals:Boar Ram Dog Bird
Description: This jutsu traps the opponent in a virtually inescapable sphere of wind, the barrier is as big enough to house a human, the only downside to this is that the user needs to have at least an arm in contact with the sphere of wind.
The opponent is unable to move and breathe in this high-speed moving dome of wind, should the victim attempt to touch the barrier, they would suffer 2 inchs cut and would be blown back to the center violently.
The velocity of the travelling wind will make the opponent unable to see because they will be forced to close their eyes when the gust of wind blows violently enough to leave the target suspended, the wind created isn't capable of killing . This jutsu can be stopped if the user removes their body in contact with the body, by expelling chakra out of one's tenketsus(the entirety) simultaneously to disrupt the chakra being formed and eventually break the technique


Name:Wind release: Rat Violent Quake
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: 40m
Handseals: Tiger Boar Bird
Speed: 60
Description: After the needed handseals, disks of wind(2m radius ) will be generated in front of the user. This technique is the wind release version of the lightning release: rat violent quake, only stronger. The several destructive blades will spin and attack the target, once they are launched, they can be controlled by the user, but cannot make 90 degrees turns( the user can make them attain a zig-zag formation, can make the discs swerve etc). The disks will have no problem cutting steel. Blades are 30

Name:Wind release: punch
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range:[b]: 2m
[b]Handseals:N/A
Speed:Speeds up object with 20speed
Description: A simple technique that when the user performs a punch, a gust of wind is created that can easily knock off a human as if they weighed nothing, if used on a human, the human would be blown back and feel the impact of the user's punch( at the direction of the user's punch) despite not being punched at close range, when performed on an object, it increases their speed by 20

Name: Wind release: Wind cell
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Element
Range: 15m radius
Handseals: Tiger Hare Bird Ram
Speed: 75
Description: After the needed handseals, the user will place their hand on the ground and send chakra to a particular place, once the chakra reaches it's destination, it would form into a closed cylindrical barrier made of one's wind release chakra that will have a 30m diameter. The cylinder itself is capable of dealing cuts and blowing objects backwards when touched, but a spinning effect is added to it, which makes it seemingly powerful and a useful barrier technique.
Because of the way the barrier is, it would need a jutsu of S rank to stop it, but A rank katon can also stop it, as for raiton, an S and D rank technique is required to stop it.
The cell is 60m high. It is covered above by a layer of futon that looks like a mille-fille, below
is just a wide horiZontal flat surface that prevents the enemy from burrowing underground



Uhm ryan, I already stated the range, they are 5m( which means appear 5m away from the user)

In your twister give size of each blade as well as exactly how many circle you. Also when sending them in all directions include how far they can go. Also what do you mean it can travel thirty meters away from you. If it passed through your body you'd get fucked up by the blades.

How does one escape wind prison. Also include a dimension for the radius of the sphere.

For quake, how many discs. Wind techs are not invisible. Remove this bit please. To what degree can they be controlled. Remove the bit about cutting steel cause I feel you'd use it to break people's weapons

Uh... Include a durability or strength for people who wouldn't be knocked off their feet by a C rank. I would make it like 30 strength or 30 endurance. Also include how far it knocks them back.

A rank cells can only be used to stop A rank attacks. Only barriers can block a tier higher. Range should be how far away you can produce this cell, not how large the cell is. Also how tall is the cell. Also put an element

Urrghh, ok, I'll work on this, I'll remove the invincsibility part, and I'll edit the others. But 30 strength and 30 durability is too low, infact, I don't think durability can stop this, it's just blowing you backwards, no damage however, but there is a downfall, once chakra is applied to the feet, they wouldn't be moved at all, it has the same effects as Gale palm, so it means that it can't knock stuffs like big summons and heavy things away

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[quote=darny]
Name: Wind Style: Wind Twister
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range: Close(5m)
Handseals: Bird
Description: After the user performs the bird handseal, a twister of wind will appear around them.  This jutsu when used will create a twister of wind with a diameter of 5m, the twister created is as a result of many wind disks spinning at a very high speed(crescent shaped), this jutsu can be used to send the many blades out in all directions, proving as a very efficient offensive technique. The technique can travel 30m(since twister originates 5m away from the user, they can travel outwards for 25m, totalling 30m) a away from the user. If the user is to move, the twister would follow them. Despite it's offensive capabilities, it can be used as a defensive jutsu, and can only be seized in it's motion with a b ranked technique(exception is katon, which requires a c rank katon).
"How far can these things be shot? What damage do they do? Details." 

Name:Wind release: Wind prison
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range:Close
Handseals:Boar Ram Dog Bird
Description: This jutsu traps the opponent in a virtually inescapable sphere of wind, the barrier is as big enough to house a human, the only downside to this is that the user needs to have at least an arm in contact with the sphere of wind.
   The opponent is unable to move and breathe in this high-speed moving dome of wind, should the victim attempt to touch the barrier, they would suffer 2 inchs cut and would be blown back to the center violently.
    The velocity of the travelling wind will make the opponent unable to see because they will be forced to close their eyes when the gust of wind blows violently enough to leave the target suspended, the wind created isn't capable of killing . This jutsu can be stopped if the user removes their body in contact with the body, by expelling chakra out of one's tenketsus(the entirety) simultaneously to disrupt the chakra being formed and eventually break the technique
"A strong enough person should be able to move in this sphere of wind. 50+ strength."

Name:Wind release: Rat Violent Quake
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: 40m
Handseals: Tiger Boar Bird
Speed: 60
Description: After the needed handseals, disks of wind(2m radius ) will be generated in front of the user. This technique is the wind release version of the lightning release: rat violent quake, only stronger. The several destructive blades will spin and attack the target, once they are launched, they can be controlled by the user, but cannot make 90 degrees turns( the user can make them attain a zig-zag formation, can make the discs swerve etc). The disks will have no problem cutting steel.
"How many disks?"
Name:Wind release: punch
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range:: 2m
[b]Handseals:N/A
Speed:Speeds up object with 20speed
Description: A simple technique that when the user performs a punch, a gust of wind is created that can easily knock off a human as if they weighed nothing, if used on a human, the human would be blown back and feel the impact of the user's punch( at the direction of the user's punch) despite not being punched at close range, when performed on an object, it increases their speed by 20
"This is nintaijutsu."
Name: Wind release: Wind cell
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Element
Range: 15m radius
Handseals: Tiger Hare Bird Ram
Speed: 75
Description: After the needed handseals, the user will place their hand on the ground and send chakra to a particular place, once the chakra reaches it's destination, it would form into a closed cylindrical barrier made of one's wind release chakra that will have a 30m diameter. The cylinder itself is capable of dealing cuts and blowing objects backwards when touched, but a spinning effect is added to it, which makes it seemingly powerful and a useful barrier technique.
  Because of the way the barrier is, it would need a jutsu of S rank to stop it, but A rank katon can also stop it, as for raiton, an S and D rank technique is required to stop it.
"Approved.."


Uhm ryan, I already stated the range, they are 5m( which means appear 5m away from the user)[/b]
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Ok, I'll do the edits, but I don't think it has to be nintaijutsu,cause it's more like Gale palm and chakra enhanced strength

Besides, wind prison is similar to water prison, thw water current(in this case, the wind currents) prevent movement. But I'll edit somethings

They can move 25m away from the user, I specified that in my last post, and therer's no number, it's more like sickle weasel technique, only smaller.

I forgot to add that they do B ranked damage, they can cut steel, piercing through human bone is no problem(considering the nature of futon).
And for the other's, I did the edits. But isn't chakra enhanced strength medical ninjutsu instead of nintai?.
If so, then maybe you can approve my wind punch

So urrgh, why has work been abated from this thread.

Name:Wind release: Rat Violent Quake
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: 40m
Handseals: Tiger Boar Bird
Speed: 60
Description: After the needed handseals, disks of wind(2m radius ) will be generated in front of the user. This technique is the wind release version of the lightning release: rat violent quake, only stronger. The several destructive blades will spin and attack the target, once they are launched, they can be controlled by the user, but cannot make 90 degrees turns( the user can make them attain a zig-zag formation, can make the discs swerve etc). The disks will have no problem cutting steel.
"How many disks?"

So zig zag as in 45 degree angles? Almost all wind techs are limited in a linear or circular fashion. For you to be able to force a spinning wind current to move in such increments sounds kinda silly

Name: Wind release: Wind cell
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Element
Range: 15m radius
Handseals: Tiger Hare Bird Ram
Speed: 75
Description: After the needed handseals, the user will place their hand on the ground and send chakra to a particular place, once the chakra reaches it's destination, it would form into a closed cylindrical barrier made of one's wind release chakra that will have a 30m diameter. The cylinder itself is capable of dealing cuts and blowing objects backwards when touched, but a spinning effect is added to it, which makes it seemingly powerful and a useful barrier technique.
Because of the way the barrier is, it would need a jutsu of S rank to stop it, but A rank katon can also stop it, as for raiton, an S and D rank technique is required to stop it.

How tall is this? its not a barrier jutsu its a wind jutsu so requiring higher tier techs to destroy it doesnt make sense. It can be destroy by A ranks, Ill except one S rank raiton since raiton is weak to wind. also your element only says element, please specify wind.

Wind cell Is a barrier, didn't you read it thoroughly?
And controlling the discs in a zig-zag formation is possible. 'Most' not all have a circular or spinning motion. Futon:Rotating shuriken and Asuma's trench knive controlling technique doesn't go in a straight line.
A disc is similar to a shuriken, it can swerve and perform almost everything a shuriken can, and I think shurikens can be controlled

Shuriken are controlled through strings or magnetism or other altering forces, not just because.

And i did see that you called it a barrier. This doesnt make it a actual barrier jutsu. Its still a wind jutsu, its basically just a wall of wind. Even if its for defensive purposes it has no reason to have protection of a rank above.

It's a frigging barrier!!!!!

its not a barrier and it wont get the added defense for the same reason a wall of fire or a wall of earth wouldnt.

Dude, what's a barrier? It's more like Uchiha Flame formation, are you gonna tell me it's not a barrier ninjutsu.
Or are you trying to say that a wind release technique can 'never' be a barrier technique?.
Oh please, it creates a cylinder of futon chakra around the opponent(s), and it restricts them to that area until they can break out with the required jutsu.


Why isn't it a barrier ninjutsu. I want to know

It could be a giant fucking teddy bear for all i care its not getting the extra defensive ability.

You gotta gimme a reason y'know

So what? You're just gonna keep writing that for the remainder of the time we have left on earth.
Y'know, two can play this game

Ryujin wrote:

[quote=darny]
Name: Wind Style: Wind Twister
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range: Close(5m)
Handseals: Bird
Description: After the user performs the bird handseal, a twister of wind will appear around them.  This jutsu when used will create a twister of wind with a diameter of 5m, the twister created is as a result of many wind disks spinning at a very high speed(crescent shaped), this jutsu can be used to send the many blades out in all directions, proving as a very efficient offensive technique. The technique can travel 30m(since twister originates 5m away from the user, they can travel outwards for 25m, totalling 30m) a away from the user. If the user is to move, the twister would follow them. Despite it's offensive capabilities, it can be used as a defensive jutsu, and can only be seized in it's motion with a b ranked technique(exception is katon, which requires a c rank katon).
"How far can these things be shot? What damage do they do? Details." 

Name:Wind release: Wind prison
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range:Close
Handseals:Boar Ram Dog Bird
Description: This jutsu traps the opponent in a virtually inescapable sphere of wind, the barrier is as big enough to house a human, the only downside to this is that the user needs to have at least an arm in contact with the sphere of wind.
   The opponent is unable to move and breathe in this high-speed moving dome of wind, should the victim attempt to touch the barrier, they would suffer 2 inchs cut and would be blown back to the center violently.
    The velocity of the travelling wind will make the opponent unable to see because they will be forced to close their eyes when the gust of wind blows violently enough to leave the target suspended, the wind created isn't capable of killing . This jutsu can be stopped if the user removes their body in contact with the body, by expelling chakra out of one's tenketsus(the entirety) simultaneously to disrupt the chakra being formed and eventually break the technique
"A strong enough person should be able to move in this sphere of wind. 50+ strength."

Name:Wind release: Rat Violent Quake
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: 40m
Handseals: Tiger Boar Bird
Speed: 60
Description: After the needed handseals, disks of wind(2m radius ) will be generated in front of the user. This technique is the wind release version of the lightning release: rat violent quake, only stronger. The several destructive blades will spin and attack the target, once they are launched, they can be controlled by the user, but cannot make 90 degrees turns( the user can make them attain a zig-zag formation, can make the discs swerve etc). The disks will have no problem cutting steel.
"How many disks?"
Name:Wind release: punch
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range:: 2m
[b]Handseals:N/A
Speed:Speeds up object with 20speed
Description: A simple technique that when the user performs a punch, a gust of wind is created that can easily knock off a human as if they weighed nothing, if used on a human, the human would be blown back and feel the impact of the user's punch( at the direction of the user's punch) despite not being punched at close range, when performed on an object, it increases their speed by 20
"This is nintaijutsu."
Name: Wind release: Wind cell
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Element
Range: 15m radius
Handseals: Tiger Hare Bird Ram
Speed: 75
Description: After the needed handseals, the user will place their hand on the ground and send chakra to a particular place, once the chakra reaches it's destination, it would form into a closed cylindrical barrier made of one's wind release chakra that will have a 30m diameter. The cylinder itself is capable of dealing cuts and blowing objects backwards when touched, but a spinning effect is added to it, which makes it seemingly powerful and a useful barrier technique.
  Because of the way the barrier is, it would need a jutsu of S rank to stop it, but A rank katon can also stop it, as for raiton, an S and D rank technique is required to stop it.
"Approved.."


Uhm ryan, I already stated the range, they are 5m( which means appear 5m away from the user)[/b]

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Since you haven't complained about the rest and since Ryujin approved the technique(see the quote) I think I can get a pass on it.

Darny wrote:

You gotta gimme a reason y'know

uh...not to play the bad guy here but....Barrier Jutsu is Fuin I think o-o so......yeah...That's a thing. But yeah, You're not going to get extra durability. If you want that, up the rank of the wall.


Also, just saying, if someone approves something it CAN be vetoed if it's found too powerful Just saying.

Yeah, but barriers get extra strength

Yeah...so if it's not Fuinjutsu it's not a barrier.

But there is "Barrier Ninjutsu"