Early Man Suna Genin
Posts : 179 Join date : 2015-07-29
| Subject: Sachio Kenjutsu [Jutsu Reg] Mon Sep 28, 2015 6:02 am | |
| Name: Power Play Rank: C-Rank Type: Kenjutsu Element: N/A Range: Self Handseals: N/A Speed: N/A Description: Power Play is a supplementary Kenjutsu usually utilized, by those who wield great swords or weapons styled as such. Utilizing this Kenjutsu uses chakra to boost the Strength of the user by 20 Points for the duration they sustain it. During this duration their muscles will reflect these effects by slightly increasing in size. After use the users Strength falls by 10 points for the duration the jutsu was sustained.
Name: Decapitation Wave Rank: B-Rank Type: Kenjutsu Element: Fuuton Range: 15m Handseals: N/A Speed: 40 Description: Upon swinging their weapon, the user releases a thin blade of compressed wind chakra outwards along the arc of the slash. In a crescent shape, this thin blade will proceed forward and stretch long enough to be at the most 5m long at the peak of it's journey. This can easily cleave through a single structure like a building.
Name: Cleaving Spiral Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fuuton Range: 15m radius Handseals: Horse->Ox->Dog->Rat Speed: 50 Description: After the needed hand seals, the user manipulates the air currents around them in a swift and swirling motion around their body with their chakra. This creates a dome of deadly air space around the user composed of countless small blades of wind chakra. As quick as the dome is created it is released, firing these blades of deadly air currents outwards in all directions along with a powerful force of wind behind it to propel them. This can lead to many injuries with the possibility of being cleaving into two or more along with being pushed back the remaining range of the jutsu from the air currents pressure alone. These blades are up to 2m long each.
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Sachio Kenjutsu [Jutsu Reg] Mon Sep 28, 2015 6:45 am | |
| Since power play is D rank, please change 20 strength buff to 10 strength buff.
For decapitation wave, most weapons are far shorter than 5m in length so it'd generally be shorter than 5m. I'm gonna request that the Crest be as wide as twice the blade length considering the motion you're making. This way you can't send volleys of decapitating slashes with pocket knives. Please remove the effects of the jutsu being able to cleave through structures and people. The damage it does will be based off the durability Stat of the person attacked.
Not really sure what this sentence is saying. " This can lead to many possibly being cleaving on into two or more along with being pushed back the remaining range of the jutsu from the air currents pressure alone". Could you reiterate? | |
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Early Man Suna Genin
Posts : 179 Join date : 2015-07-29
| Subject: Re: Sachio Kenjutsu [Jutsu Reg] Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:57 am | |
| - Ryan wrote:
- Since power play is D rank, please change 20 strength buff to 10 strength buff.
For decapitation wave, most weapons are far shorter than 5m in length so it'd generally be shorter than 5m. I'm gonna request that the Crest be as wide as twice the blade length considering the motion you're making. This way you can't send volleys of decapitating slashes with pocket knives. Please remove the effects of the jutsu being able to cleave through structures and people. The damage it does will be based off the durability Stat of the person attacked. The durability section of the stat system details what damage you can sustain or to what level you can reduce it to. The description of damage that is possible is necessary, because you have no system saying, C-Rank jutsu do this amount of damage max. Say I hit someone who had this durability, but took out my jutsu's damage description.
16-30: Your typical kunai and shuriken won't go past a centimeter into your flesh.
With no damage description in the jutsu the type of damage it could cause is now unknown.
Not really sure what this sentence is saying. " This can lead to many possibly being cleaving on into two or more along with being pushed back the remaining range of the jutsu from the air currents pressure alone". Could you reiterate? I based Power Play's buff off of Body Flicker Name: Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/a Range: - Handseals: Ram Speed: Boosts user's Speed by 30 Description: The Body Flicker Technique is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (May not initiate an attack until the next post. This applies to all techniques akin to this jutsu.) Gives 30 as a D-Rank while mines gives 20
Made the wording edit and bumped the 2nd jutsu to B-Rank, but since the crescent grows as it continues onward, I'm not seeing why the crest can't be allowed to reach 5m in length. | |
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| Subject: Re: Sachio Kenjutsu [Jutsu Reg] Mon Sep 28, 2015 10:48 am | |
| Body flicker is a special technique in itself, not all D ranks get that high of a boost, it's the only one and should remain the only one | |
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Early Man Suna Genin
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| Subject: Re: Sachio Kenjutsu [Jutsu Reg] Mon Sep 28, 2015 6:12 pm | |
| In turn Power Play is bumped to C-Rank now with the stat boost of 20 still. | |
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Early Man Suna Genin
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| Subject: Re: Sachio Kenjutsu [Jutsu Reg] Wed Sep 30, 2015 11:05 am | |
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