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PostSubject: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeMon Sep 14, 2015 3:11 pm

Name: Dark Detection
Rank: D
Type: Nin/Gen/Med
Element: Yin Release
Range: 30m from user.
Handseals: n/a
Speed: ---
Description: Masters of the Yin release can feel the presence and manipulation of nearby Yin chakra. A semi-passive Jutsu, The user is able to detect the presence and direction of Yin chakra being formed or manipulated from up to thirty meters away from his location. This jutsu activates on its own when a jutsu that utilizes yin release (such as genjutsu, shadow clones, Dojutsu, etc. ) is used within that radius from him.


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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeFri Sep 18, 2015 11:23 pm

Wut. I don't even understand what this does. Is this sensory?
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeFri Sep 18, 2015 11:47 pm

Yeah. I can feel the presence and determine the direction from my location of yin chakra that is being molded, manipulated, or used within a 30m radius. It is however extremely vague as it only alerts me, but doesn't inform me of the jutsu being used, the power of it, or the exact location, just more or less that someone is doing something northwest of me and I should be on my guard.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeSat Sep 19, 2015 3:42 pm

Do you mind rewording it a bit to make it clearer.

Maybe something like:

The user is able to detect yin Chakra for up to thirty meters. This jutsu activates on its own when a jutsu that utilizes yin release (such as genjutsu, shadow clones, Dojutsu, etc. ) is used within the thirty meter radius.

Also, this is more like a D ranked tech imo.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeSat Sep 19, 2015 6:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeSat Sep 19, 2015 9:08 pm

This has three types. Make it just nin
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeSat Sep 19, 2015 9:19 pm

that was purposeful as it requires a mastery of yin which would require equal mastery in ninjutsu, genjutsu and medical. In order to learn it, you would not only need yin release, but have at least 2 in nin, gen and medical skills. When i eventually create a light detection for yang release, it will require nin, fuin and med.

Either way it fits with my clan's theme as most clan jutsu also are multi-type, but i'll change it if you insist.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Detection   Dark Detection Icon_minitimeSun Sep 20, 2015 2:04 pm

Nah. I see your point. Approved
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