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Vaati Suna Genin
Posts : 117 Join date : 2015-08-15 Age : 38 Location : Galveston tx
| Subject: Dark Detection Mon Sep 14, 2015 3:11 pm | |
| Name: Dark Detection Rank: D Type: Nin/Gen/Med Element: Yin Release Range: 30m from user. Handseals: n/a Speed: --- Description: Masters of the Yin release can feel the presence and manipulation of nearby Yin chakra. A semi-passive Jutsu, The user is able to detect the presence and direction of Yin chakra being formed or manipulated from up to thirty meters away from his location. This jutsu activates on its own when a jutsu that utilizes yin release (such as genjutsu, shadow clones, Dojutsu, etc. ) is used within that radius from him.
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| | | Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Fri Sep 18, 2015 11:23 pm | |
| Wut. I don't even understand what this does. Is this sensory? | |
| | | Vaati Suna Genin
Posts : 117 Join date : 2015-08-15 Age : 38 Location : Galveston tx
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Fri Sep 18, 2015 11:47 pm | |
| Yeah. I can feel the presence and determine the direction from my location of yin chakra that is being molded, manipulated, or used within a 30m radius. It is however extremely vague as it only alerts me, but doesn't inform me of the jutsu being used, the power of it, or the exact location, just more or less that someone is doing something northwest of me and I should be on my guard. | |
| | | Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Sat Sep 19, 2015 3:42 pm | |
| Do you mind rewording it a bit to make it clearer.
Maybe something like:
The user is able to detect yin Chakra for up to thirty meters. This jutsu activates on its own when a jutsu that utilizes yin release (such as genjutsu, shadow clones, Dojutsu, etc. ) is used within the thirty meter radius.
Also, this is more like a D ranked tech imo. | |
| | | Vaati Suna Genin
Posts : 117 Join date : 2015-08-15 Age : 38 Location : Galveston tx
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Sat Sep 19, 2015 6:14 pm | |
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| | | Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Sat Sep 19, 2015 9:08 pm | |
| This has three types. Make it just nin | |
| | | Vaati Suna Genin
Posts : 117 Join date : 2015-08-15 Age : 38 Location : Galveston tx
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Sat Sep 19, 2015 9:19 pm | |
| that was purposeful as it requires a mastery of yin which would require equal mastery in ninjutsu, genjutsu and medical. In order to learn it, you would not only need yin release, but have at least 2 in nin, gen and medical skills. When i eventually create a light detection for yang release, it will require nin, fuin and med.
Either way it fits with my clan's theme as most clan jutsu also are multi-type, but i'll change it if you insist. | |
| | | Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Dark Detection Sun Sep 20, 2015 2:04 pm | |
| Nah. I see your point. Approved | |
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