Ayatsuri Kumo Genin
Posts : 164 Join date : 2015-09-06
| Subject: Bone Dancer II Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:15 am | |
| Name: Dance of the Blue Bells Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Self | 2m Handseals: N/A Speed: User's speed + weapon bonus Description: With this dance, the user will exert chakra to the bones in her spine and coccyx region, pushing the bones out and forming a thick, spiked tail of bone that the user can freely manipulate as though it were an additional limb. The tail can create a nasty surprise to anyone who attempts to strike the user from behind and, once formed, can continue to cause mayhem on the battlefield.
Name: Dance of the Lilacs Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Self Handseals: N/A Speed: N/A Description: A strange application of the Kaguya bloodline, this ability allows the user to harness the bone-building cells of her body, forming a calcium rich solution which is then stored within the center of other bones. Used in conjunction with another dance, this creates a kind of poisonous effect as anyone pierced by the bones will have a small amount of the solution inserted within them. The solution then begins to harden, forming a foreign mass of bone equal in size to the cube of the wound made (minimum two cubic inches) wherever it has struck. This results in immense pain for the victim and, depending on where located, can hamper or prevent movement, as the new bone displaces and damages surrounding muscle tissue. Alternatively, this liquid could be expelled and stored within a container or weapon for later use.
Name: Dance of the Sequoias Rank: A Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Range: Self Handseals: N/A Speed: N/A Description: A passive ability of the highest caliber, the Dance of the Sequoias represents a true mastery of the bloodline. Developed by a young woman, this dance causes the chakra within the bones of the body to increase, upping the hardness of the bones even more than usual, granting an additional twenty points of durability to the bones as well as one rank in the blocking of elemental or chakra based attacks. Do note, that this ability cannot be learned or used multiple times and is, generally, ineffective against elements which the bones cannot block, such as the shocking effects of raiton.
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Bone Dancer II Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:38 pm | |
| Dance of the blue bells approved.
For dance of the lilacs, how does one remove this created bone. Also, please specify that it requires the attack to Pierce the flesh of the target as bone doesn't simply grow on skin. Also please bump to B rank.
Please include upkeep for Sequoias | |
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Ayatsuri Kumo Genin
Posts : 164 Join date : 2015-09-06
| Subject: Re: Bone Dancer II Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:08 pm | |
| Thanks!
Lilacs is meant to be used in conjunction with some other dance. So if you use this to modify Dance of the Willows, the bones for that dance will have this stuff in them and when they are pierced they'll get painful bone growths. Added in the pierced part, can't believe I forgot that. Bumped rank.
This was intended to be a totally passive thing, but maybe that won't work? If so I may just remove it. It just confused me that Kaguya bones can withstand such high weapon damages but such relatively low jutsu attacks. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Bone Dancer II Sat Oct 03, 2015 7:52 pm | |
| For lilacs, the only question I have is:
If a bone starts to grow on top of my other bones, how do I stop this extra Bone from growing. | |
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Ayatsuri Kumo Genin
Posts : 164 Join date : 2015-09-06
| Subject: Re: Bone Dancer II Sat Oct 03, 2015 8:55 pm | |
| Oh sorry that was unclear. It only grows for like a second, so you don't need to stop it since it stops after a brief formation period. I added in the size of the bone mass. Hope that makes sense. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Bone Dancer II Sun Oct 04, 2015 11:21 pm | |
| Okay these look good to me | |
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