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PostSubject: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeFri Oct 16, 2015 4:47 pm

Name: Raiton: Senkei kasokuki no taihō (Lit. Lightning Release: Linear accelerator cannon)
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: 80m
Handseals: Ox -> Rabbit -> Clap Hands
Speed: 100
Description: [science] A railgun consists of two parallel metal rails (hence the name) connected to an electrical power supply (In this case, an S-rank amount of Raiton chakra). When a conductive projectile is inserted between the rails (at the end connected to the power supply), it completes the circuit. Current flows from the positive terminal of the power supply up the positive rail, across the projectile, and down the negative rail, back to the power supply. [/science]

With the pulse of chakra and the activation of the seal, placing a metallic item within the confines of the rails causes the item to propel forward at an unreasonably quick (100 speed). Whilst the technique still isn't very diverse in aim, being forced to linear movement it is incredibly devastating.
Drawbacks: If an additional A rank of chakra is not expended then the rail alignment takes one post before the shot can be fired. As mentioned before it is linear in movement - once that item leaves the rail, it isn't coming back. Highly visible and the sonic boom is probably going to deafen the user for a while unless sufficient ear protection is worn (10 posts) and within a 25m radius everyone will suffer ringing in their ears, effectively rendering their hearing next to useless for 3 posts. Outside of A or above ranked weapons, the two rails must be identical in length and will be destroyed beyond repair upon firing of the technique. This also goes for the fired item.


Last edited by Elixar Takoyaiba on Sun Oct 25, 2015 6:40 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Errors)
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSat Oct 17, 2015 5:57 am

This needs some lowering. Lower the speed and range please
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSat Oct 17, 2015 6:00 am

Could I lower damage output and range as a compromise?
Railguns have a speed of 1.8km per second irl, so 60mps seems like a but of a downgrade anyway :p
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSat Oct 17, 2015 6:03 am

The speed would definitely need to drop. 150 on here is the fastest something could go, aside from the 7th and 8th gates, and those have massive drawbacks. You can basically snipe everyone, as the cap for people not having an active boost is 100 speed
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSat Oct 17, 2015 6:36 am

Fair enough, will pm when edits are made, thanks for the clarification
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSun Oct 25, 2015 6:23 am

Remove "surpasses that of an S rank technique" please, also the speed section of the jutsu says 10 whilst the jutsu itself says 100, just fix that typo please
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSun Oct 25, 2015 6:40 am

Fiiixed, thanks for that xD
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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Release: Rail Gun   Lightning Release: Rail Gun Icon_minitimeSun Oct 25, 2015 6:47 am

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