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darny Suna Genin
Posts : 480 Join date : 2015-08-23 Age : 22 Location : Ogun State, Nigeria
| Subject: Extra gear Sun Oct 04, 2015 7:55 am | |
| Name:Prosthetic wings Rank:C Type: Prosthetic device Materials:Waterproof Metal, plastic, foam Visual Description: . The spokes are made of durable, strong and light yet waterproof metal that are hollow which supports flight, the wings itself are formed with the same light metal, however, these are made up of very thin lines of the waterproof metal, that were professionally cut from very thin sheets of the metal. The wins have a device that is attachable to the back of the user, that attachable place is covered with foam, , this acts as shock-absorbers when the wing is violently shoved to the back of the user, or when something hits it and it is sent onto the back of the user. Ability: Major Ability This provides the user with flight, at the end of the wings, which is the part that is attached to the user's back, there is a part that is made with plastic and metal, this are made to be cables and motors which attach themselves to the user's shoulder and back, the wings are able to be moved and controlled depending on the way the shoulder, back bones and back muscles are moved, the wings can be folded by the user. C ranked chakra can be channeled into the wings to grant flight(lasts for 3 posts) after which another set of C ranked chakra must be transferred to make it fly. The discount received on the C ranked chakra to be transferred depends on the user's highest skill point(must not be fuinjutsu, genjutsu or juinjutsu) Minor Ability Also, since they are waterproof, they can be used as paddles for swimming and fins for swimming in water, *The user retains their speed when used for swimming, when outside water, they have a +20speed increase when flying Cost:200ryo+3000 and 1000(Major and minor abilities) Total Cost:4200ryo Requirements: Must have a skill point of 2+. Fuinjutsu, genjutsu and juinjutsu is not part of the equation so it must be the other skills. - Reason Why Fuinjutsu And Co can't be used in tandem with this weapon[/spoiler:
*Controlling this with chakra is a form of puppetry, puppetry is ninjutsu, controlling this with iryo ninjutsu is still good to go cause it is somehow related to Iryo, also taijutsu can be used with these because it's more or less like controlling an extra limb and moving your body in a way of sort. Fuinjutsu and genjutsu doesn't go with these, I don't need to explain that, and juinjutsu together with these doesn't sit well with the equation, so that's a no to me
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| | | darny Suna Genin
Posts : 480 Join date : 2015-08-23 Age : 22 Location : Ogun State, Nigeria
| Subject: Re: Extra gear Sun Oct 04, 2015 8:07 am | |
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| | | darny Suna Genin
Posts : 480 Join date : 2015-08-23 Age : 22 Location : Ogun State, Nigeria
| Subject: Re: Extra gear Sun Oct 04, 2015 9:39 am | |
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| | | Will Konoha Jounin
Posts : 746 Join date : 2015-08-16
| Subject: Re: Extra gear Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:49 pm | |
| Flight will be a major ability and cost as such, as well as costing a chakra upkeep for the flight.
What do you mean by the wings being electroplated with impurities? Do you mean they are immune to electrical damage? If so, this will also cost and needs to be specified.
Swimming with +20 speed is a minor ability.
I think that's it. | |
| | | darny Suna Genin
Posts : 480 Join date : 2015-08-23 Age : 22 Location : Ogun State, Nigeria
| Subject: Re: Extra gear Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:32 pm | |
| Ok, if that's it, it's good, but I don't think I need chakra upkeep, it's a prosthetic right? And prosthetics don't use chakra, right? | |
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| Subject: Re: Extra gear Fri Oct 09, 2015 4:39 pm | |
| You didn't do any of the edits he mentioned >.> Why ask me to check this | |
| | | darny Suna Genin
Posts : 480 Join date : 2015-08-23 Age : 22 Location : Ogun State, Nigeria
| Subject: Re: Extra gear Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:12 pm | |
| So, I'm done with the edits, sorry, I thought I was done with the edits before. Hope this is good | |
| | | darny Suna Genin
Posts : 480 Join date : 2015-08-23 Age : 22 Location : Ogun State, Nigeria
| Subject: Re: Extra gear Sun Nov 01, 2015 2:49 am | |
| I'm done with these baby, I guess. Cause I think I've made all necessary edits | |
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| Subject: Re: Extra gear Sun Nov 22, 2015 6:37 am | |
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