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Shiro Aburame Konoha Genin
Posts : 13 Join date : 2015-09-06
| Subject: Canon Aburame Jutsu Sat Oct 03, 2015 1:20 am | |
| Name: Insect Jar Technique Rank: B-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Range: 10 meter radius around user Handseals: Boar → Monkey → Dragon → Ram → Dog Speed: 100 Description: This technique uses kikaichū as a shield by having them fly in a dome shape at high speed, similar to the Hyūga's Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven after the user performs their hand seals. The dome is strong enough to destroy incoming attacks, but can be disrupted with sufficient explosive force.
The dome can block up to A-Rank jutsu and ANY physical attacks along with small explosive tags up to two tags, requiring three tags or more at once to actual disrupt it. At the same time the dome can cause bruises and small cuts with normal kikaichū, while keeping the attacker out of the dome.
Name: Insect Clone Technique Rank: C-Rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Range: Same country as the user Handseals: N/A Speed: User's Stats Description: A secret technique exclusive to the Aburame clan, where thousands of kikaichū are gathered in one place to take on the appearance of the user or anyone else the user wishes. The technique is elaborate enough to be mistaken for the original, and therefore may be used as a decoy or as part of a diversionary tactic. Furthermore, since one can put the insects in standby somewhere beforehand and then have them assume the form of the clone, this technique is arguably even more effective than the Shadow Clone Technique, depending on the task. When struck, the clone falls apart into its component, bugs. It can be risky for the foe to go into close combat with an insect clone since the kikaichū can drain their chakra on contact. Also, because it's made of bugs, it can reform almost instantly.
This clone can use any insect or taijutsu techniques the user knows and has as much chakra as the user decides to give the clone. However, the amount must total at least the cost of the jutsu. The clone has the same stats as the user, aside from durability, being able to reform after attacks.
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:34 pm | |
| Insect jar needs a size of the dome. Please make this in diameter
Also, insect clone needs Chakra and stats of some kind. To get a full split of the users Chakra it will need a higher rank than D. Also as for stats at D rank, I suggest 33% of the users Stats.
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Shiro Aburame Konoha Genin
Posts : 13 Join date : 2015-09-06
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Sun Oct 04, 2015 9:50 am | |
| Bump - Editted jutsu, but I just bumped Clones a rank and kept the same stats seeing as they have the drawback of not being able to use elemental jutsu. | |
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Will Konoha Jounin
Posts : 746 Join date : 2015-08-16
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Sun Oct 04, 2015 4:13 pm | |
| I think both of these are already in the clan app. Bug Jar is for sure. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:09 pm | |
| That's hardly a drawback. From what you've displayed these clones are almost just as powerful as a shadow clone. C rank is still cutting it too low if you want them to adopt all of your qualities other than elemental jutsu | |
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Shiro Aburame Konoha Genin
Posts : 13 Join date : 2015-09-06
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Mon Oct 05, 2015 12:24 am | |
| Bump - The clones only get Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, and non-elemental jutsu, this leaves out fuinjutsu, puppets, genjutsu, medical jutsu, etc.
Also as for them being in the clan app they are, but just no mechanics are made they are just linked. | |
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Katsuro Kumo Genin
Posts : 56 Join date : 2015-08-02
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Wed Oct 07, 2015 1:13 am | |
| I say bump Insect Clone to B rank. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Wed Oct 07, 2015 7:54 pm | |
| Ugh. So add a real range to clone. Most clones aren't seen going severe distances from the user. Also, you don't get to choose how much Chakra your clone has. It needs an assigned amount. I suppose at B rank it can have one full share of your Chakra, however you lose that Chakra in the process. So your Chakra is split in half AFTER you use the jutsu. Then you have to pay an upkeep. If the clone is destroyed then you'd get the chakra it has left back. Hm. Also bump to B rank. | |
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Akio Uchiha Kiri Chunin
Posts : 127 Join date : 2015-08-02
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:42 pm | |
| Are you serious, most clones have ranges like that and I have not once seen a clone technique with a real range. On top of that what is wrong with being able to pick the amount of chakra the clone gets. Finally, why in the world would a clone jutsu require an upkeep, now that is just stupid and has no reasoning toward it. | |
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Ryan
Posts : 500 Join date : 2015-08-04
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Wed Oct 07, 2015 11:09 pm | |
| Uh. All clones require upkeep. In the early canon naruto would exhaust himself with Shadow Clone jutsu quite often. They also get a set amount of chakra or an even split of the users. And most don't travel a whole country. Lightning clone does but that needs to be edited in order for Shadow clones to have the unique quality of long distance travel. | |
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Akio Uchiha Kiri Chunin
Posts : 127 Join date : 2015-08-02
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Thu Oct 08, 2015 3:39 pm | |
| I'm okay with the set amount, although the canon reason is wrong. Naruto would exhaust himself because he would split his chakra evenly among 100 or so clones and then trained on that low of reserves. | |
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Will Konoha Jounin
Posts : 746 Join date : 2015-08-16
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Thu Nov 19, 2015 2:17 am | |
| This clan is being revamped, so hold on this for just a bit. But do you still want this? | |
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Akio Uchiha Kiri Chunin
Posts : 127 Join date : 2015-08-02
| Subject: Re: Canon Aburame Jutsu Tue Nov 24, 2015 4:21 pm | |
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